Jennifer, this a nice little story that you compiled. Good writing, good reporting. The obvious technical issues detract from your presentation. This would be unacceptable in a professional setting. Tips for moving forward: Slow down in your narration and think about the words for appropriate emphasis. Don’t rush through it. Your writing is good and I’d like to think about what you are saying. Use a good microphone. Despite our lecture in telling everyone to consider a professional microphone, it doesn’t appear to have been used. In the future, don’t sacrifice quality sound.
April 14th, 2013 at 9:10 pm
Jennifer, this a nice little story that you compiled. Good writing, good reporting. The obvious technical issues detract from your presentation. This would be unacceptable in a professional setting. Tips for moving forward: Slow down in your narration and think about the words for appropriate emphasis. Don’t rush through it. Your writing is good and I’d like to think about what you are saying. Use a good microphone. Despite our lecture in telling everyone to consider a professional microphone, it doesn’t appear to have been used. In the future, don’t sacrifice quality sound.